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Love Bites: The Devil Inside Group Review

 

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Yesterday we brought you an interview with Mynxi, we hoped you enjoyed it as much as we did! Today we reviewed her winning one shot for both Best Plot line and (three way winner) the Voters Poll. Check it out!

The Devil Inside by Mynxi

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There is nothing better to me right now then the way this story ended.  Sorry for jumping right to it, but it's my favorite part.  The rest of the story you're just...so involved with it that you don't even think something like this could happen, and then BAM!  I was like WTF?  Did he make it up?  Or did he completely lose it?  Or both?  I still don't know.  I applaud such an original plot.  I mean, it takes a lot to knock me upside the head like this, and mynxi succeeded.

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This was such a good OS for this contest, because it was completely a lovers scorned story. We have Jasper, a compete playboy, willing to fall for a girl and give her a chance, He gets spooked over Bella's admission of not wanting to be with him anymore and after working out some fine details with her, he things she's the one. On the night of the big dance, he gets a surprise along with his heart broken, when he finds out that Bella isn't who she seems to be. I don't want to spoil all the fun, but this OS had me hooked and wanting to know what happened next. If you are looking for a good jaw dropper, then check this story out. I was so happy that Mynxi submitted this story, as it was a damn good read and well deserved her win for it. 

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Poor Jasper! My heart breaks for him in this one. His heart was broken once and as a result he turned into a real player until he meets Bella. Will he let her in? Can she change things for him, or is she playing him? It's very easy to see why this fic won for Best Plot and tied for 1st in the Voters Pick. It's a well written and fully developed o/s. And, it has one of those endings that makes you scream, "No way!"  Check this one out, you'll be glad that you did.

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The Devil Inside is a fantastic one shot! I thought it truely captured the lovers scorned aspect of the contest really well and deserved to win in both cat's. I loved that the plot line was well thought and perfectly executed! Jasper is amazing in this one shot -- his character is very complex and he has a great character developement through his and Bella's interactions.
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