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Broke by Shadowbox N. Paperchase
After reading the summary for Broke, I knew that I had to read it. It was too irresistible to pass up. Rather than ruin the surprise, I'll just get right to the point and give you a little glimpse of where we find our two favorite boys:
"Do you have any idea why you guys are here?" Mike asked in a friendly sort of voice, as he pushed the record button on the camera. A little red light blinked on indicating that he was now recording.
I took a deep breath and let it out slowly.
"Yeah," Jasper answered, "our friend Jacob said that we both could make some easy money for 'bout an hours worth of work."
"That's right, super easy money," he said before his lips quirked up into a smile. I decided I didn't like his smile very much.
"What do we have to do?" I asked quietly, sliding my sweaty palms over my jeans. I already knew what the Mike was going to say but I wanted to hear it from his lips and not rely on Jacob's vague
explanations.
"I want you both to take off your clothes, we will put some porn on and I then want you both to jack off," Mike answered in a business like tone, "I will
be recording."
Yes. You read that right. They're getting paid to jack off on camera. This is the part where we all collectively drool and wish with all our little hearts that such a tape actually existed.
Oh, if you haven't guessed yet, this is a slash story. A hot slash story.
So anywho, the guys are nervous as hell, but they're broke and $100 is a helluva lot of money to get paid just for jacking off, right? So they strip and get to business, trying and keep their eyes to themselves because looking at your best friend jacking off is really weird, right? But Edward can't seem to stop staring at Jasper pleasure himself and it spurs him on. They get really into it and then...
"Hey Jasper," we both looked up at Mike at the same time, "I give you fifty more if you reach over and jack Edward off."
Yes. You read that right, too. Yes, Jasper does it with no hesitation. Thank fuck he's broke.
Jasper is rocking Edward's world, because he's a damn pro at jacking off and Edward is about to blow his load right then and there, until...
"Edward?" Mike said my name in a low voice, I didn't look up at him, and I didn't want to miss a moment of Jasper's hand on my cock. "Offer stands for you too, fifty more," Jasper stopped stroking me, and grabbed my hand, forcing my fingers to unclench from the cushion. He brought my hand
up to his mouth, and spit into it, he then
guided it down to his cock. My breath caught in my throat, as my cock pulsed. I would have come right then and there if he had been still touching me.
Yummy. Yummy. Yummy.
So here these two straight boys are, desperate, broke and jacking each other off on camera for some cash. And it's just... yummy. Sorry, I can't think of any other word because my brain stopped functioning as soon as the boys stripped off their clothes.
"Edward," Mike's voice made me jump, I had forgotten that he was over there. I looked up and over to him. I could see that our little show had excited him. He was palming a lump in his pants, "go ahead and suck his cock. Fifty more."
Dun, dun, duuuuuun...
Does Edward do it?
You'd better believe it- he's broke!
UNF. UNF. UNF.
Even though Eddie has never sucked a cock before, he knows how he likes girls to do it to him, so he uses that knowledge and makes Jasper's (and my) toes curl. There's hair fisting, gagging, deep throating and more jacking off that had me running for a cold shower when it was all over.
A few weeks pass and the boys are confused because they're straight... right? But they're kind of friends with benefits and enjoy the occasional dick sucking, which confuses them even more.
One day, Jas heads over to Edward's place and accidentally catches him jacking off while looking at porn on his laptop. Edward immediately turns off the computer and covers himself up, beyond embarrassed at being caught.
"Hey, it's no biggie, so you were rubbing one out. It happens," I said, letting him know that I was planning on letting this go without any teasing at this time. Everything was hunky dory in my book. I
took a deep breath to suggest that we go somewhere to eat so that I could tell him about my good news when I heard something that stopped me cold. It was my own fucking voice coming out of
his computer speakers.
"Fuck, I'm so close. Yeah, like that, take it deep. God, you are so good. Fuck, Edward, so close. Fuck…now…I'm gonna come!"
Edward's eyes flew open in shock as realization of just what I was hearing crossed my face. He quickly reached over to his desk and twisted a knob on the
speakers, turning the sound off. We stared at each other in silence. I couldn't even form any words yet, I was still in shock. Edward looked afraid.
The silence stretched on.
What can come of the situation? Will Jasper be angry? Offended? Disgusted?
Hell no! He's turned on and lets that fact be well-known as he tongues down his bestie. Things are getting hot and heavy, when Edward decides to tell Jasper his intentions.
"Jasper?" He leaned in and sucked on my lower lip, tracing his tongue across the flesh. I then heard something that I never thought would affect me the way it did. His mouth was about an inch away
from my ear, his breath was hot. "I'm going to fuck you."
Yes. Oh yes.
More, please! *gets down on my knees* I'm not too proud to beg.
If you like boy secks and smut (honestly, who doesn't?) this story is definitely for you. Read it, love it, review it, and when you do, tell SNP that the Darlin's sent ya!
Until next time...
November 23, 2010 at 11:08 AM
*runs off to read*
November 24, 2010 at 8:42 AM
Your reviews are so fucking hillarious.
I do miss the shcmexiness that was Raw & Rosie, so yes, gonna be adding this one to my reading list.
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