Today, a few of us review Inches and Miles by Dalia907; which won, in a three way tie, the Voters Poll of the Love Bites Contest! And we all know you are a good judge of Jasper, so be sure to check it out! Trust me, you won't be dissapointed!
Oh, broken hearted Jasper always devastates me. This o/s fit perfectly within the confines of this contest. Jasper is truly a lover scorned. The fic is well written and offers a bit a mystery too, so I was captivated. I love the title because it explains how we can sometimes be so close, but yet so far away to find what our heart really wants. The ending left it wide open for a continuation too.
The entire tone within Inches and Miles was wonderfully written. I like that Jasper's actions and subsequently the sucker blow series of events at the end of the one shot remain almost entirely subtle. There is a dark shadow cast over the tone, as the reader is privy to very little information – we don't know the characters histories, or truly who they are, just how Jasper feels in this one significant moment and the air of mystery teamed with the angst kills me in the most beautiful way to read.
Inches and Miles is incredibly heart felt and bitter-sweet ~ the overall tone is full of angst and suspense, leaving you wondering what is truly going on right up until the very last line, which of course delivers the sucker blow. I would love to see this one shot continued as I think it left on an amazing cliffhanger in it's own right, but could give purchase to a great Darksper multi-chapter as we explore some of the history and relationships we aren't yet privy to...Jasper has such amazing depth and potential to be truly devastating and dark. Yum!
Inches and Miles is incredibly heart felt and bitter-sweet ~ the overall tone is full of angst and suspense, leaving you wondering what is truly going on right up until the very last line, which of course delivers the sucker blow. I would love to see this one shot continued as I think it left on an amazing cliffhanger in it's own right, but could give purchase to a great Darksper multi-chapter as we explore some of the history and relationships we aren't yet privy to...Jasper has such amazing depth and potential to be truly devastating and dark. Yum!
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